Mrs. Hicks’ 2nd graders from Mt. View Elementary, in Corvallis OR, accepted my writing challenge!
Behold their sequels to GOLDIE LOCKS HAS CHICKEN POX:
I love them ALL, but the rhymed ones really tickled me. Here are a few excerpts–which pieced together make quite a fun story!
Brother Locks has chicken pox from head to toe.
Goldie recovered, as we know.
“Brother has chicken pox?”
Goldie Locks was truly shocked…
Jack be Nimble came to play.
Brother said, “Go AWAY!”
[Goldie] –Little Red wants to play.
Today’s the right day.
Jack and Jill came down the hill
with a pale
Mother said,”…We took his temperature.
It went off the scale!”
Then Bo Peep went looking for her sheep
and she saw what happened to brother.
She said, “Don’t let it spread to another
The Doc came down the clock.
Then we saw the spots
on Mother’s face.
by Abby and Scarlett
[The doctor said,] “I know the cure.
You should get cheese and muffins and vinegar.”
Bing pop floot
they were gone.
Awesome job, my writing friends. Congratulations to all!