
Hi Friends,
I’m so honored to be a part of #kidlitzombieweek! Partly because I know firsthand what it’s like to dig up an old manuscript. Believe me, with 20+ picture books and more on the way, I’ve buried my share of projects and I’m sure there will be others. (Cue the bugle player: “Taps”)
Sometimes you re-read a manuscript and realize those rejections were right. Sometimes you wonder what absolute genius wrote it! (Short answer: You.) Most of the time, you end up somewhere in the middle. You know there’s a diamond in there. But how do we find it?
Go back to kindergarten.
Remember the joy of playing with clay? We got lumps of clay and rolled them into snakes (or pretended they were zombie guts!) and sometimes coiled them into cups or vases. Sometimes we smushed whatever we had created and started over. I’m willing to bet it didn’t matter that you didn’t know what you were doing. It was just fun.
Sometimes we adults lose sight of the fun in creating. We just want that agent. That book deal. That YES.
But a potter doesn’t just throw one messy lump of clay on a wheel and call it art. Right? The same thing goes for a manuscript. Sometimes we need to smush it down and start over and over. And over. But NOT because what we’ve created is wrong. It’s actually OK to not know what we’re doing. It’s part of the process.
There’s a reason we call it Language ART.
You know that zombie manuscript you dug up? Approach it like an artist. Find a sketchbook (If you’re like me there are abandoned sketch books or blank books hiding in your house.) I prefer blank pages to lined paper. Write your story out longhand, just as an artist starts with pencil sketches. Format it like a poem—even if it doesn’t rhyme. Doodle in the margins. Write the entire story in a circle. PLAY with the words.
Here is a page from DEAR EARTH…From Your Friends in Room 5 (Illus. Luisa Uribe/ Harper Collins.) Language ART is messy.
Sometimes you have to pull everything apart.
My next book, SQUIRREL DRAWS BIG FEELINGS (Beaming Books/ Illus. Luciana Navarro Powell / Coming Spring 2026–> Look for a cover reveal next month!) began in 2020 as a manuscript about a quarantined Bear, inspired by the fabulous chalk art Luciana created on sidewalks in Bellingham WA during the pandemic.


But even with Lu’s amazing illustrations, editors didn’t think COVID was going to last long enough to warrant a picture book. Also, I couldn’t help noticing there were already a lot of bear books. >sigh< We tucked it away.
I pulled the manuscript out again as we emerged from our homes, and it seemed that everyone was a lot more cautious. Worried. Anxious. From Kinders to adults, we seemed to have lost our social and emotional skills. What if chalk art could help Bear cope?
WAIT JUST A SECOND. There we go with the bears again. What to do?
I smushed up my story. I pulled everything apart and got messy. At first I made Playground the main character. But then Squirrel showed up and couldn’t sit still. What if chalk art calmed him down? And what if Porcupine felt the pricklies? And –that thing about three— what if their friend bear had ROARful days? Now we were on to something.
This week we’ve been asking you to rethink and reSEE, and suggesting ways to revive your manuscript zombies. I’m asking you to get messy. Dig in. Computers are wonderful tools but sloppy copies and revisions are a real and necessary part of making language ART. Early drafts and rejected manuscripts are NEVER wrong. They are the clay.
What will you make today?
Say it with me friends:
Writing is a Language ART.
Now go and play with those words.
*****
BONUS video: In case you need proof of ALL my zombies….

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PS Huge thanks to Kaitlyn Sanchez and Team Zombie!
Such a helpful post! There’s something so beautiful about filling a notebook page with messy stanzas of a story. Thank you 🙂
Thank you! Glad you found it helpful. Now go make some ART with your words!
I’ve printed & played, but never wrote out the MS & played! Love it!
So happy you’re going to play. Have FUN.
Love the suggestion to get messy! I write all my manuscripts longhand, but usually revise on the computer. I am happy to play with this zombie script today.
Excellent. When you have fun, readers can feel it in your voice!
Thank you! Love the suggestion to get messy! I write all my manuscripts longhand, but usually revise on the computer. I am happy to play with this zombie script today.
Yayy! Go for it. Make some ART with words.
This is great advice. I’m lucky that I pretty much always have crayons and chalk around with my 2 year old and 4 year old. We even got an easel for the 4year old’s birthday. Maybe I can commandeer it. Congrats on your books! We are big fans of Christmas Ahoy!
Oh, an easel would be great fun. Do it! And thanks for the kind words about CHRISTMAS AHOY!
I love the idea of writing the PB out longhand like a poem as well as doodling. I’ll be trying this!
Yes! I truly feel it helps to connect us with more parts of our creative selves. Have FUN.
Erin, thanks for the truly fun article. I’m an oil painter when I’m not writing PB’s and love the artistic abandonment when creating with words or paint. I love a messy canvas and notebook!!!
“Artistic abandonment” is a great phrase. Cheers to a messy notebook!
Even though I’m taking the month of June off from writing I had to read this and do a little revision tonight 🤫
Ha–I love this so much! Hope you have fun!
I usually start out writing my story longhand, then switch to the computer once I’ve got a decent draft (or at least a decent opening). I definitely prefer lined paper, though! Thanks for reminding us to keep playing with our words.
Yes! Happy to hear you areon Team Longhand. : )
Love the idea of pulling a “stuck” manuscript apart and getting messy. Great advice, Erin! Thanks.
You’re so welcome. Enjoy the PROCESS.
ERIN: THANK YOU SO MUCH for INSPIRING us to go back to kindergarten in order to get in-touch with our child self again, so we can TRULY create. I will be keeping your words of WISDOM by my desk for CONTINUED ENCOURAGEMENT: “Early drafts and rejected manuscripts are NEVER wrong. They are the clay.” I also MUST THANK Max the Writer Dog! The link to his video in your post didn’t work, but I found it in the “Writers” section of your site just fine. I HOPE Max makes MANY more videos! Like him, I look to Snoopy the Writer as my Writing Muse (I keep a little statue of him at work on the typewriter where I can see it and be INSPIRED EVERY DAY!). The part of the video with the typewriter on top of Max’s igloo doghouse—LOVE IT!!! So, THANK YOU both for the MUCH-NEEDED ENCOURAGEMENT and INSPIRATION “. . . to smush [the clay/manuscript] down and start over and over. And over . . . to play with those words.”
You are most welcome, Natalie. Max and I are honored to reside by your desk. Happy smushing!
Love the idea of getting messy with longhand and doodles. And Max is awesome! Thanks for the tips and motivation, Erin!
You’re so welcome, Donna. We’re all in this crazy #kidlit thing together!