Hi Again–Room 313 is back from Bainbridge Island, WA, with a few thoughts about writing, and a few poems that we wrote with Erin Dealey!
That’s our teacher, Ms. Strayer (above), with two of Erin Dealey’s books.
We read a bunch of them. See our last blog takeover (click here) for the reviews.
This blog post is about our writing.
Writing is a way to share our opinions. Writing is not like Math, where there is only one right answer. Some of us thought writing poems would be boring and painful but it wasn’t.
Poems can be about things you like:
You can share your feelings.
I hate to write
Writing is kinda fun
Fun = Sam
Sam is my friend
Friends, I only have a couple
by Liam
Poems can be about your pets!
Nora (my dog) is the best,
best at running
Running fast
Fast eating too,
She is so cute!
by Luisa
Poems express our feelings.
This poem is about report cards,
report cards are scary,
scary things are worth screaming,
screaming is normal,
normal is this,
this is a poem about report cards
by Sam
Poems can surprise you!
Poems can make you smile.
That tiara is sparkly
Sparkly like jewels
Jewels make me do the opposite of frown
Frown is the opposite of smile
Smiles make my day just like that
That tiara is sparkly
by Hannah
Poems can help you get through tough times.
Poems can be about sports.
Taekwondo is fun.
Fun things like weapons and sparring.
Sparring is a part of taekwondo .
Taekwondo is a cool sport.
by Cristina
Poems aren’t boring after all!
See what we mean?
My underwear
My closet is full of underwear everywhere
Underwear is taking over
My poem is over. Underwear.
by Sean
We hope you liked our poems.
(You can tell us in the comments if you want!)
Thanks, Erin Dealey. We think you’re funny.
We like your books.
We voted on our favorites.
Happy Book Birthday PETER EASTER FROG!
Bye bye. That’s all for now from Room 313. Except:
And…check out this reading song from Erin Dealey:
(also on YouTube and iTunes!)
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